Misshapen
A moment like any other
You're standing up straight and tall
Becomes an instant of smother
It feels like you just took a fall
Your self-composure collapses
You fall on your knees to the ground
As the time slowly elapses
Your composure is never found
posted by Ocean Shell @ 10:51 PM
1 Comments:
I really don't know where to begin, because I didn't really understand most of your poem, I thought that it was good though. I thought that your poem about a misshappen was a good way to express yourself, because you just broke your guitar. I also thought that it was a little funny, but I don't really know why. (Because I pictured your face when you broke your guitar.)
Keep up the good work!
James
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